Autumn leaves

Here is my Autumn Leaves poem

Clocktower

Rapunzel

Hi my name is Rapunzel , you all no the story when I was trapped in a tower well thats not me but I
do live in a tower but not any old tower a CLOCK TOWER! Is it time I tell you that story well lets
get started.

It all started one crispy morning down by the lake there was a flash of light in the water and
suddenly my mind went blank. A lady dressed in black, rose from the water and cried out, “hello
my dear I am your Godmother, don’t be afraid.” But I was afraid, what do I do I thought in my head,
do I run away or stay here?

“Rapunzel, Rapunzel come here”, my mother was calling me, “Sorry I have to go.” But the
godmother wasn’t listening she was thinking of an evil plan. Sorry if I didn’t mention that I have two
Godmothers, one nice and the other evil. I am now talking about the bad one. And here is what
she is thinking about……………

This evil Godmother wants to turn me into a clock tower because she hates little kids and she
always knows that her sister, the nice Godmother is always watching her back so this time the spell
is permanent but if the nice sister tries to break the spell I will reappear as myself but still have to
work the clock. And if I spin faster the clock will keep working if I want it will only keep working if I stay in the tower but if I want to go out the whole village will fall into a deep slumber for 50 years.
And only the the nice Godmother can help me fix it.

My key competency goal reflection!

1.I need to make sure I do my homework.

2.I also need to work on getting to work and do more writing.

1.I have improved in this goal because I do my homework but I dont always bring it to school.

2.I am still working on this goal because I don't always get to work and I know that I still am working on this goal.

Math goal reflection!

1.I am learning to group within 100 faster.

2.I am learning to add facts to 20 faster.

1.I have improved this goal because I am getting them quicker and faster.

2.I have improved this goal because I am doing my maths work sheets quicker.

Reading goal reflection!

1.Skip the word and come back to it when reading.

2.Chunk letters and sounds together based on patterns I know.

1. I have improved on this because I have been reading every night and my mum and dad have commented about it.

2.I have improved on this because I am reading harder books now books with only some pictures.

Writing goal reflection!

My writing goal is to put more ideas in my writing and add more in my planning because it will help me with my stories. 

I have improved in my writing goal but I'm still working on it because I have not been making lots of plans but I still have great writing and still add ideas in it. Miss Cooper has been giving me good feedback!